Some days I feel so sad,
some days I cannot last.
Some days there is no glad,
some days I have a blast.
When life seems to get hard,
Take a look at the world.
The anger, the pain, barred,
Weeps will wither and whirl.
What means a lot to all,
is attitude! that's all!
I find this one to be the most intriguing. This poem relates to teenagers and to me. People have problems like those sometimes, but it just depends on how we look at them.
ReplyDeleteThis is good stuff. The first feels a little contrived, a bit to basic for you. But the imagination starts pumping for the last half. I like your use of 'barred' and alliteration. This is the kind of invention poets need.
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