My name is Steven tien this is a redo of a resume of myself
My name is Steven, I live in Canada. I extremely love to play hockey and I love to be in the water. Hockey is my favorite sport, I first had contact with hockey in grade 5. I fell in love with it and I started to force myself to skate, even on the road. Hockey is an energized sport that requires more concentration than endurance, this is the reason why I find hockey exciting and fun.
Swimming and scuba diving are my most enjoyed activities to do during summer. I love to stare into the water a discover marine animals and the various colorful coral reefs. I like to just float on the surface of the water and it feels relaxing and serene. I love to drift amongst the waves and feel nothing at all. Once I saw a lion fish while I was scuba diving, I also saw a few giant clams wiggling through the rocks inside the water.I feel that whenever I am in the water, I am someone else that enjoys life not on land, but in the vast ocean.
Very tiny, but interesting, bio. There must be more to you than two things you like to do. You might also look into fused sentences and comma splices, though we'll talk about that this year. Thanks for sharing.
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